We have the winners of our National Poetry Day poetry competition! Congratulations to Irena Tojcic and Daniel Bartlett. The judge said:
We had an overwhelming response to the poetry competition and every single entry was outstanding. It was a hugely difficult task to pick a winner out of the nearly 130 poems entered. It was even more difficult to pick a winner out of the top 10 shortlisted poems as each one was moving and/or thought provoking. I kept coming back to two poems in particular and after much angst chose this one as the overall winner.
Here are the winning poems:
Untitled by Irena Tojcic (Winner)
I touched the groundUnderneath your shadow,Warm it was.I turned around andMet your name,Familiar it was.Yet,I kept silent,Holding tightlyA pulsating fish of my heart,Not letting it escapeInto your river.
Birthday Party by Daniel Barlett (Runner up)
It’s pretty dark
And only getting darker
So put on your parka
And close your front doorYou’re looking great
And I’m a mess
But nevertheless
I’ll be trying my best
To keep it togetherAnd keep you interested
For at least
The next ten minutesAnd when we get to town
When we get to your friend’s house
As I’m sure we willI’ll let go of your hand
As you push aheadAnd I’ll want to say your name
But instead
I’ll say nothingI’ll just wait
For the security light
To click onLetting your shadow
Measure the distance between us
Lovely poems. Congratulations.
I bet it was a hard decision to make – 2 wonderful poems chosen as winners! Both very dark but moving poems.
Great poems, Congrats to the authors. Love, even thwarted or frustrated in the best subject!
hi is it possibole to see the other poems
are they published somewhere?
love to see them
Absolutely Shirley – we will be posting them on the blog from time to time. Lots of goodies to enjoy. ^Donna